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Saturday, 10 March 2012

Fade To black

This place suddenly seems
so lonely and strange..
As if somebody this morning
did a massive rearrange..
Once upon time,
I felt this place so very mine..
Now I feel like an outcast
made to stand in a different line..

they say, life changes.. Every sec
every moment....
Just a night passed by
and I already feel like a slime
on the muddy pavement..
The only thing I ever wanted
was love from all..
But everybody only saw
my wrongs and built the wall...

Around my own people,
I feel like a ghost tryin to hide from the sun..
Is it true...?
Or am I really turning into one ?
No wonder this place
suddenly seems so lonely and strange....
Somebody really did a massive rearrange...
And put me as a ghost in the world of the living...
For a change... :(

Things not what they used to be
Missing one inside of me
Deathly lost, this can't be real
Cannot stand this hell I feel
Emptiness is filling me
To the point of agony
Growing darkness taking dawn
I was me but now he's gone

Now Playing : Fade To Black by Metallica

P.S : I feel that "Fade to Black" is one of the most amazing tracks I have heard. Nothing personal, but this was an inspired post with some random thoughts while listening to the song and hence the name of the post. 

Cheers...!!!!! :)


  1. I love this stuff Nick, awesome post mate, some of those lines in those lyrics really strike me, I can empathise.

  2. Change is the only thing that is constant and I hope these lines to change into happy ones along with the sad smileys you included there. And this place is not lonely, the person does seem to be, Just saying.

    P.S. No one but me can save myself and ITS NOT TOO LATE. (Just saying, again!)

  3. I can't help but love this. I really felt each word. I could relate. Wonderful work! :)

  4. damn, u can rhyme...
    I think i fall in love with poetry, and the poet, everytime i read a good poem.

  5. So deep so profound! Love this piece of yours!! :)

  6. babu g
    offo rock kar diya
    and the pic you chose.
    i like i like. :D
    and thy words seem like they are dipped in the amalgamation of the perfume of reality and imagination (whooofs..!! )
    gonna hear the song soon..! :D

  7. profound :)
    P.S: metallica used to be my high school favorite.

  8. People when judge, notice our bad qualities first. It's human tendency.
    And after a point, we do start feeling lonely. But look within yourself, and ignore the cruel words of people :)
    Lovely poem. But get the funny Nick back :P