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Monday, 2 April 2012

You are beautiful



The eyes that see the world,
And the heart that see beyond,
whispers slowly to my mind, "you are beautiful"


Now Playing : "You are beautiful" by James Blunt

P.S : This is was the part of blublubling's Awesome April posts. Click here to find more about it.
P.P.S : my first attempt at writing Haiku poems. Pliss to bear. And not to worry, more will follow. *evil smirk*
P.P.S.S : Life is travelling at light speeds and work rate is quite lethargic and slow. So pardon the absence. Will try to post whenever I can.
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15 comments:

  1. Outcast2 April 2012 at 20:16

    That song is so damn amazing man, James Blunt is a serious talent. I loved the haiku as well, it's seriously good.

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    1. Superrrnickkk...!!!!3 April 2012 at 16:27

      Oh ya.. True that bud... James blunt is some talent i must say..!!! This song brings so many memories. Thank you for liking the post. It was good to be back and write something. Will be back soon.. With More and for more :):)

      cheers..!!

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  2. CD!!!2 April 2012 at 22:00

    LOVE this song and the haiku is beautiful!
    And you were missed(your posts actually). So read your previous posts :)

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    1. Superrrnickkk...!!!!3 April 2012 at 16:20

      Wow... Atleast somebody missed my writing...!!! That's kinda inspiring to try and write often :):)
      thank you liking the haiku... Its a raw attempt though :)

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  3. Krishna Sruthi Srivalsan2 April 2012 at 22:59

    Whoa! :) Awesome, really!!

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    1. Superrrnickkk...!!!!3 April 2012 at 16:18

      *bows*
      thenk you.. Thenk you.. Thenk you..!!!! :):)

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  4. Kshipra3 April 2012 at 01:28

    The Haiku is lovely....
    And the song...Like Bull's eye.
    :)
    Beauty is deeper than what beholds the eye.

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    1. Superrrnickkk...!!!!3 April 2012 at 16:16

      Tangerine... Thank you liking it. And exactly.. The song is a musical bliss :):)

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  5. Spaceman Spiff3 April 2012 at 11:06

    I love love LOVE that song. In fact, I had made my own version of it.
    *clears throat* I'm beautiful, I'm beautiful, I'm beautiful, I know...

    Wonder why my version wasn't as popular. Hmph.

    And yes, the Haihuku haihuku is also nice. :P

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    1. Superrrnickkk...!!!!3 April 2012 at 16:15

      Spiffy..!!! Wah wah.. Wattey version i say... I think there is some foreign conspiracy why you version dint become popular..!!!

      N haihuku haihuku is all hai hai..!! :):) i am simply loving them :)

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  6. Carnett Rose3 April 2012 at 14:04

    Shouldn't a Haiku follow the 5, 7, 5 syllables format? I can't find it in yours. I could be wrong, though.

    But the lines itself are very profound. :)

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    1. Superrrnickkk...!!!!3 April 2012 at 16:10

      Hey Rose.. Firstly thank you. N Yup.. Haikus are supposed to follow 5 7 5 syllable format.. But its hard for me to stick to the text book rules :D:D i just was trying something here.. Will work on it though :)

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  7. Superrrnickkk...!!!!3 April 2012 at 16:20

    :):)

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  8. Confused Soul16 April 2012 at 12:25

    Simple yet sweet :D

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  9. Saru Singhal16 April 2012 at 19:25

    Lovely haiku...This is beautiful...:)

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shasaboeyyyyy...!!!!!