Something that sounded crazy and funny when I wrote this.. try singing along the last lines of each para :D
cheers..!!!
The dark clouds over the setting sun
cheers..!!!
The dark clouds over the setting sun
thunderin a soft song....
slow breeze patting my face,
bringing the rain drops along....
joining the hymn in pain...
somebody inside me singing,
in the choir of lonely rain....
and while am wondering if my life will ever be right...
I hear Elvis sing from an old jukebox,
"are you lonesome tonight...??? "" :)
should I be happy
or should I be sad n sore..
my refelection in the mirror so different
god its so hard to just ignore...
are these mumbling words
or am I talking sane...???
for its raining hard
and knocking my window pane...!!!
its thundering
but I dont hear a sound...
I see flashes of lighting all around...
it feels like a long wait
to see the rising sun...
and in the corner of my mind is
Linkin Park singing "whaaat I ve doneeee..???"
somebody drew wrinkles on my face,
promising days warm and bright.
now its all broken and I dint even put up a fight..
I see myself in the mirror
the eyes hides some unknown fear...
I ask the guy whose face has a smile
like some kind of smear...
do you want to gaze the stars
or dance like your end is near... ?
waiting for an answer was when
within my pocket ipod Jay z sung
"forever young.. I wanna be forever young" :)
My heart's a stereo
It beats for you, so listen close
Hear my thoughts in every no-o-o-te
Make me your radio
And turn me up when you feel low
This melody was meant for you
Just sing along to my stereo
This is sooo good. I mean I actually read it twice I liked it so much. Specially the Elvis para.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Nia :) and welcome to the devil's workshop :)
Deletehey this is awesome stuff.. Too good.. Kudos
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ReplyDeletehitting back
uh..?
great work
this title gives me a very particular image
somwhere near the countryside , its sunny and you lie down on ya arm chair wid this orange drink and you have your stereo
sounds perfect
this poem was awesome.
:)a
and 58 followers
congoz
:)
enjoy
tc
buwahahhaahha.. arey 58 and still counting bolo :D thanks Sooo.. Glad you liked it :)
DeleteSomebody is thinking a lot eh??!!
ReplyDeleteNICE NICE
And gym class heroes ft adam levine...m playing it right now!
hahahhaha :D wel.. actually ya.. a bit too much of thought process happening though nothing worth a post :P and its a nice track..!! happy listening :)
DeleteThis was a very refreshing read :) I loved how you added the songs :)
ReplyDeleteStereo heart is amazing :D Listen to cookie jar
Sure I will :) Thanks a bunch for liking it :)
DeleteSuch A fresh post. :)
ReplyDeleteUr blog is
1.refreshing with the colours..
2.Plus there is music.
I am happy :D
following you back.
Hey, welcome to the devil's workshop :) The pleasure is mine :)
DeleteAmazing! What else does someone want! Amazing stuff to read and great music to listen to:) Love this place but why din't I get the update of this post :-?
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DeleteThank you so much for liking the post :) :)